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Alright. Finally page 5 comes into play. This one is a little late... but not too bad. Tried a few new things with this. Adding a "BOOM" in the background. Pure photoshop... I don't think I did TOO bad of a job. Still looks completely cut out.. but... hey, no real seamlines I guess. Bah.. it's just for effect. Now, my action lines in panel 2 are... well..... not perfect. It was the first time I attempted them and obviously I need to work on them some more. While their not terrible... they're not great either.
Panel one... I was trying to do some nifty effects. Unfortunately I ended up with a lot of dead space. REALLY need to rework an idea like that next time.
Panel three I really like. Came out almost exactly like I wanted.
Panel 4... should have added some blood or something to indicate that he was in a fight. Of course, I JUST now thought of that.
Panel 5 I was really hoping for kinda a "lights out" effect. I'm not sure I was super successful. Ah well. Live and learn. This page I do believe overall is my most successful yet.
Now, the fight between Hugo and Jeyna is over... and on to some "conversation." I WILL be writing a script for each page before laying down any lines. Being it only a page though.. I don't think that should take too much time. I'm expecting to have another page finished by the very latest... tomorrow. Will it go up? Hell no. This is a once a week comic. :)
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